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21 March 2011 @ 10:13 am
[fic/art] Communiqué Ch 11  
Authors: cassiopeia13 & dragonsquill
Fandom: Star Trek: AOS
Pairing: Kirk/McCoy, Sulu/Chekov, Scotty/Chapel
Rating: PG-R
Warnings: Intense Graphical Story, Humor, crack, MPreg
Disclaimer: Star Trek and all people, places and things in Star Trek are not ours and we're not making any money from any of this... sadly.
Summary: The trials and tribulations of the Enterprise told as an epistolary novel. After a misunderstanding leaves Kirk, Sulu, Scotty and a poor security Ensign knocked up, these are the stories that unfold...
Chapter List: Chapter One, Chapter Two, Chapter Three, Chapter Four, Chapter Five, Chapter Six, Chapter Seven, Chapter Eight, Chapter Nine, Chapter Ten, Chapter 11, Chapter 12, Chapter 13, Chapter 13 Bonus, Chapter 14, Chapter 15, Chapter 16, Chapter 17, Chapter 18, Chapter 19, Chapter 20, Chapter 21, Chapter 21 Bonus

Complimentary Fics: Against the Wall (set after ch 4)

























Chapter 12
 
 
 
 
mercaquemercaque on March 21st, 2011 06:53 pm (UTC)
"and they adorable Pavel"

I DIED!!! Was this on purpose? It's the greatest typo ever! In fact I just loved Sulu's sister in this, the two of them have such a believable and endearing and sensible back-and-forth. They truly feel like siblings. And Chekov's reaction was great - yes, I can totally believe that he would be secretly THRILLED and trying not to freak Sulu out about how much.

I love this saga! Poor Scotty!
SpaceCrazyArtistcassiopeia13 on March 21st, 2011 07:04 pm (UTC)
HA. No that wasn't on purpose. But I think I might leave it. Hey! Normal people have typos right?! Might as well have a few in here too ^_~

Yeah, I admit I LOVE Akane. She amuses me greatly so I hope I can do lots more letters from her. I might stick one in on the next chapter.

Pavel is THRILLED To be a Papa! And he's being overly adorable and I'm sure giving the crew cavities. ^_~

I'm so glad you like it ^__^ This feedback made my day
mercaquemercaque on March 21st, 2011 07:31 pm (UTC)
You should totally leave it XD I actually strongly thought you did do it on purpose, because it's a totally in-character typo (and maybe a bit of a Freudian slip).

YAY more Akane! I adore Sulu-and-his-sisters fic!
smokiquartz: Need a bike to play on the roofsmokiquartz on March 21st, 2011 08:09 pm (UTC)
OMG!!! This is made of much win!!
"With pod" cracks me up.
And Pavel being super excited is really cute.
Just, yes!!!
<3!!!!
Rebecca: ST: Jim Hot Chickdragonsquill on March 21st, 2011 09:54 pm (UTC)
Thank you! We're having so much fun writing it and comments make our daaaaaay! *pom poms of joy!*
adafrogadafrog on March 21st, 2011 08:55 pm (UTC)
CUTE!!!!
SpaceCrazyArtistcassiopeia13 on March 21st, 2011 09:20 pm (UTC)
Thanks
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Rebecca: ST: Jim Eyesdragonsquill on March 21st, 2011 09:52 pm (UTC)
Thanks! I love watching her work on the graphics >:^} and we're having a blast writing it.

Icon <3! Darlin. *melts*
"Christine": StarTrekwolf_naked on March 21st, 2011 09:31 pm (UTC)
First of all Hikaru and Pavel are just adorable. Akane and Mama Chekov just have the perfect reactions. But the very best part? Hands down? The scene in my head imaging Bones giving them the horny teenagers lecture (one time is all it takes!) and then having the mid-rant revelation that this is not a typical result.
Though thinking about it, his giving the horny teenagers lecture over this situation at all seems a little hypocritical, afer all he knocked up Jim too.
Oh, and Christine scaring Scotty is great. She's not the other parent is she?
SpaceCrazyArtist: ST - Chulucassiopeia13 on March 21st, 2011 09:41 pm (UTC)
I was going to let dragonsquill comment to this one since we try to go halves on the replying, but I had to say that I LOVE Your icon! I was navigating away from the page and saw it and... it's utterly brilliant.

<3

Thank you for the feedback! The Bones rant totally came from an IM conversation (which is how all this gets done). I should post that conversation, it's seriously hilarous. HAHAHA! I had to toss it into this story SOME how.

Of course Bones is 32 and Chekov actuallY IS a teenager. He's only 18 so far. *pats him on his adorable head*
Rebeccadragonsquill on March 21st, 2011 09:53 pm (UTC)
HMMM Maybe I should write that scene up properly? 0_~ Do you have the convo handy??
"Christine": StarTrekwolf_naked on March 21st, 2011 10:43 pm (UTC)
I know as a member of the audience I would totally love to see it.
And thanks for the icon love cassiopeia.
True Pavel is only eighteen, we (okay, I) do tend to pet him for it and then forget.
SpaceCrazyArtist: SH - Voguecassiopeia13 on March 22nd, 2011 01:48 pm (UTC)
Hmm... Why I believe I shall have to dig that out of the archives
karmachankarmachan on March 22nd, 2011 01:23 am (UTC)
OMG - that was so funny and cute I nearly face-planted on my keyboard due to the whole squee of it all.
SpaceCrazyArtist: Kitty Sillycassiopeia13 on March 22nd, 2011 01:47 pm (UTC)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
Blink'nblinkn on March 22nd, 2011 05:36 am (UTC)
too cute!
SpaceCrazyArtistcassiopeia13 on March 22nd, 2011 01:32 pm (UTC)
Thanks
sayfraysayfray on March 22nd, 2011 10:04 am (UTC)
'But you squeak!' Is the best line ever. I love putting my cold toes on my husband when he hogs the bed, though he just grunts and rolls to his side.

I can't to see what develops with the "with pod" crew members, specifically Jim and Bones. Though the letters between Chekov and his mama were so sweet, I had the thickest Russian accent going round in my head I almost didn't understand it!
sayfraysayfray on March 22nd, 2011 10:05 am (UTC)
*can't wait to see... obviously I need to go to bed now, lol.
SpaceCrazyArtistcassiopeia13 on March 22nd, 2011 01:47 pm (UTC)
*laughs* That's how I write Chekov! With a russian accent. It's hard not to write "zat" instead of "that" but yeah, I think Mama Chekov actually doesn't speak much standard, I dunno why but I like the idea of Hikaru having to learn Russian.... poooooor Hikaru.


Glad you like!
AnnaStesia the bookfairy: BlameJimannastesia on March 22nd, 2011 08:02 pm (UTC)
God, I love these :D Only problem is that I can't read them at work since I'd end up rolling on the floor :D :D Thank you :-*
Rebecca: ST: Jim Eyesdragonsquill on March 23rd, 2011 02:26 am (UTC)
*DIES FROM ICON AWESOMENESS!!!!*
AnnaStesia the bookfairy: STTrioannastesia on March 23rd, 2011 07:45 am (UTC)
Thanks, I found it from http://community.livejournal.com/iconnoo/ which is one of my fave icon-groups ;)
rubynyerubynye on March 27th, 2011 06:09 pm (UTC)
Best mPreg EVER.

Comp slow hence brief. :)
SpaceCrazyArtist: ST - Christmas Jonescassiopeia13 on December 3rd, 2011 05:40 am (UTC)
I have no idea how I missed this!

Thank you so much!!!! That's high praise!!!
shadowclubshadowclub on May 16th, 2011 03:08 am (UTC)
The "with pod" is a stroke of genius! I am really enjoying this fic and I appreciate the effort you put in to make all of the images realistic with backgrounds and such:) It does really give more character dimension subtly:)

SpaceCrazyArtist: ST - Christmas Jonescassiopeia13 on December 3rd, 2011 05:39 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! We're glad you found that amusing, which of course it is!

Thank you so much for commenting! It really makes our day
smudley: KAMgaypridesmudley on December 1st, 2011 07:18 am (UTC)
Okay, can I just say how much I **love** you both for doing the bravely awesome and awesomely brave thing and going the MPREG route? I have such a soft spot for MPREG -- at least in the SG:A and ST:AOS fandoms. Some of the other fandoms I read in just don't support the trope nearly as well as sci-fi, futuristic settings do. But, really, this is just a totally yummy development, and I laugh out loud in glee over the "with Pod" every time I see it. Brava!! {{HUGS}}
SpaceCrazyArtist: ST - Christmas Jonescassiopeia13 on December 3rd, 2011 05:39 am (UTC)
Thank you! Usually I'm not much of a fan of M'preg though there are SOME stories that are done so well that it doesn't bother me. I'm glad to know that our little M'Preg was done well and that you're enjoying! Made my day to read this ^__^

Yeah, "With Pod" is the only term Jim would allow to be used around him haha. I guess it's good he's the captain.